We had a homework writing task. We could describe the oldest person we know or our favourite room in the house. I described the oldest person I know.
The oldest person I know is my Granny Palmer. She is my mums nana. She is 91 and will be 92 in July. Granny sits a few centimeters away from the TV and has the TV up really loud. She watches the sky sport channel all day. She loves Cricket, Rugby and Tennis. Her skin is thin and wrinkly. She is stooped over like a walking stick. Her hugs are soft and squishy. She smells warm and powdery. Her silver hair is permed every Friday.I love hearing all her story's of the old days. Her voice is calm but still strong.
This is a very special piece of writing, Cameron. You have described your Granny so well that I feel like I know her. I can feel the love between you. Thank you for sharing. Your family must be very proud of this!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing Cam. I love the bit about the hugs being soft and squishy! Granny certainly loves her sky sports channel doesn't she? We will have to share this with her soon.
ReplyDeletenice one cam keep it up
ReplyDeleteWow Cameron! Great piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
Amazing distribution of your Granny Palmer. Its like I've know her for a very long time. This writing must be really special to you. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteCam that is awesome! I sat there reading it grinning from ear to ear! I love our Nana and your writing is so wonderfully descriptive it makes me want to fly home just to get one of those hugs from her!! Cool stuff little man!! :)
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ReplyDeleteVery cool writing Cam. Describes Nana Elaine perfectly.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Cameron. We enjoyed your story. Nana and Poppa.
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