WALT describe using the 5 senses
- look
- hear
- taste
- smell
- feel or touch
Key:
Red means look
Blue means Taste
Orange means hear
Green means Feel
Yellow means smell
My scene: Tiger
I could feel the hunger in my stomach. I could smell the scent of a deer and I can see the deer in the distance. I sneaked up on the deer. I could taste it all ready. It heard me coming and I could just hear the deer’s hooves digging into the ground. That was it I wanted dinner I ran after it. I was gaining on the deer I took a leap and just grabbed on to it and pulled it down DINNER!!!
Amazing sense writing Cameron. Its like I am right there with you watching sneaking up on the deer. Keep up the great work.
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