Friday 12 April 2013

Water


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Here is my poem.
That we made I did it one about water.


Water



I have always been lucky
to be close to water.

It’s wavy in the sea
cold in the pool
hot in a spa.

Its also wavy in a wave pool
hard to walk in a lazy river.

Cold in the sea as well
sometimes warm.

Full of seaweed
gross.

Some water deep
some water shallow.


Hope you like it leave a comment to tell me what you think.

4 comments:

  1. I love my brothers water poem.
    From Thomas

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  2. Awesome poem Cam!!!
    But is that all you can swim in?
    Keep up the good poetry :)

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  3. Awesome poem about water Cameron

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  4. Great job Cam its a very very good poem.

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