WALT choose words that describe a moment for the reader
YOUR SIGNS OF SUCCESS
~begins in the action
~short, sharp sentences
Key words: Wedding, ring bearers , ushers
I wake up in the hotel room! I know it is the day of the wedding we’ve been waiting all week for it. Thomas and I are the ring bearers and ushers. We arrive at the church wearing our smart black suits. I feel a bit nervous. Thomas does all the talking while we give out the service sheets. In the church i hold the ring box tightly. I take off my new shoe and sock to rub my foot . Mum glares at me. I am ready when the minister calls for the rings. I give the ring to Uncle Craig. He is proud of us. I look up at the roof when Craig and Ali kiss. They are so happy.